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Ace of spades
Its looking good so far but you have a few changes to make.
~make sure you get those few shots filmed again as this will make your production look more professional and entertaining, instead of the repeated shots of shocked faces. Try and get some close ups of eyes, fingers, expressions, the poker chips, MONEY, the cards, the board and the people on the table in general as this will lead to more suspence.
~I love the (mr Jones) shouting thing BUT i think take out the "you killed your girlfried as this give away a lot of the story line. Maybe try and use the shot of him looking up and then do some flashbacks of him and his girlfriend together and then maybe her getting taken away.


HOPE
I like the storyline, it is very different to some of the other groups which is good.
There are a few changes which you need to do which will make it look more interesting to the target audience which is 16-25
~change your soundtrack; something more upbeat and lively to get the crowd going.
~try putting the 4 finalists at the begining and then showing what they do during the middle.
~work on Sadoons story because in the footage you have he doesnt look like the 'producer dude', so have him as a single performer and his girlfriend saying to him something like "its me of the music" to bring drama into the storyline, most dance and performance films usually have dramas and conflicts it would be good to show this in you trailer.