Progress Report

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ZERO

WWW:

~Great story line and you guys have thought about this really well when considering the brief, it really fits in nicely.

~You have some good shots and used some really good angles.

~Good co-operation within the group, you guys know whats best for the production and are working on it well

EBI:

~ALL members of the group are there helping so it is equal input

~work on the individual scenes that you want in you production and make sure they flow properly with your structure

~Make sure you DO NOT give away the whole story

~FINISH ALL OF YOUR FILMING

KORRUPTED
WWW:
~Clear storyline and I think you are the only group that I have seen to follow their storyboard
~Good opening
~Good choice of shots
EBI:
~Work on the music flowing with the sequence and make sure it goes on the beat, especially if you want to change the song again
~Fill the gaps on the opening with something don't just leave it empty and black it doesn't look very professional
~I think take out the 'dip to white' from the opening, if it is just a cut then it may flow better with the beat of the music
(Play around with it and see how it looks)

OBSESSION

WWW:

~Good shots

~Good structure and story

EBI:

~I’ve only seen two group members editing, make sure you all contribute to it

~Find a new soundtrack as you CANNOT use the one from Halloween as you will loose out on marks

~Try and make some longer scenes as your trailer is good for a show TV trailer but if its for the cinema then you need a bit more going on so it draw attention to the target audience and also so they know what is going on

~leave suspense so it thrills the audience and makes them want to watch your film

Gurjoth, Raminder, Jaz & Assi:
WWW:
~Good co-operation from all members of the group
~you have some good ideas and some excellent editing
~your narrative is clear and it looks like you know exactly what you are doing and how you want this to end up
EBI:
~your ideas are good but make sure they look effective when editing them as this could be difficult
~you don't want to give the ending away so make sure you have enough in their which provides an enigma for the audience and not make them think that this is another 'Ghetto boy gone good' story line