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Ace of spades:
WWW:
. Very good soundtrack fits nicely with the shots.
. Good array of shots (e.g. the burning of the Ace of spades - good effect).
. Good tempo not to slow to make audience get bored and not to fast so audience can't actually see what happening.

EBI:
. Change the shot of the expressions bit, when it keeps rewinding back and fourth makes it seem really fake.
. Allot of black screen so fill them up with shots.
. And finally your whole trailer seems to revolve around poker so I'm guessing it's to do with money, so have shots of money and close ups of it, have money used in the sequence to emphasis the power and greed of man! linking to the 'new man' (GOOD FOR EVALUATION!!).

Hope:
WWW:
. I like the shots used their is definite thinking behind each shot.
. Also it is unique in the sense that NO-ONE is doing something like it this year.
. Finally I feel that everyone in your group has a equal say on what's going on in your trailer.

EBI:
. Soundtrack seems a bit slow for an upbeat type of film.
. Storyboard your shots will be SO much easier to do your editing.

Korrupted:
WWW:
. Very good introduction because I helped :D
. Also I see that you actually thought about your shots, like you actually went on a train to film.
. Finally it all seems to be in order so it tells a narrative but without giving too much away.

EBI:
. Sort out the second soundtrack it contrasts the first one.
. Also you lot need to fill the blank spaces.
. Finally the ending is key to all trailers its the bit that really makes the audience want to watch it so make sure you have an ending that will draw the attention of everyone.

Crescendo:
WWW:
. You lot have done allot in the time given and seems to be the group that are almost finished.
. The shots used are very imaginative for example the shadow shot of the pen.
. Raminder's singing!!

EBI:
. I feel that you are giving TOO MUCH AWAY FROM THE NARRATIVE! it's a trailer not an actual full length film.
. Also you need to add that shot of the exchange of drugs still!!